Poetry Slam Success!

Last night, I joined in the Poem City Open Poetry Slam at City Hall in Montpelier (Vermont). There were 25 readers of all ages, and it was an “anything goes” line-up with songs, pianos, guitars, dancing, and more. I was excited to get 3rd place with this poem! Though I was nervous to read it due to the fact that it’s so controversial for a white person to speak on racism these days, especially here in the US.

So here it is, and tell me what you think. I’m going to work on memorizing this and editing it. A stronger performance with some rewriting to the poem could get me a 1st or 2nd place at another show… or that’s my hope.

 

One thought on “Poetry Slam Success!

  1. Linda here with high praise for this magnificent poem–and your delivery. The images are so vivid, the message so crucial for all of us who wonder what right we have to speak up on the matter of racism. I’m awed by your work, Kim…and glad to have found this blog!!

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